With Continual Reference to Justin Kahn.

Friday, April 14, 2006

My Other Project

When I am not working on my Autobiography,I have been working on,"The Divine Comedy: A New Translation." Doubtless, Dante is dancing in his grave. One of the things that is going to set this particular translation apart is that I am translating the whole thing not only into English, but into Haiku. That makes the task all the harder, but just the same I am up to it. Here's a sample from the opening Canto:

Midway on Justin's journey
I found myself lost
In woods, the right road lost--D'Oh!

Obviously that last line was tricky, b/c haiku is a very rigid form: you must have 7 syllables. But I adapted rather nicely and believe this is going to shape up into a fairly significant literary event.


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11 comments:

Anonymous said...

Completely entertaining reading what you write.

Thanks!

Shannon

WIP said...

I thought Haiku's were supposed to be 5syllables/7 syllables/ and 5 syllables i think you have it backwords.

as a writer of poetry i'm outraged. :)

just thought you should know that.
otherwise it's good

Justin said...

riyan and gentleman:
Thanks.

Indeed.

Justin

Justin said...

Shannon: I find you to be a sharp and interesting critic in the tradition of Samuel Johnson, T.S. Eliot and Other Smart People.

I thank you.

Justin

Justin said...

WIP: This Haiku is for You
Syllables are hard
So Please Don't Criticize me

Justin said...

P.S. WIP: But thanks for liking it anyway.

Jenn said...

TS Eliot. Hmmmm.

So you like TS Eliot.

Hmmmmmmmmm.

WIP said...

I suppose, no one said you couldn't do it that. it's still "Haiku" form, just modernized?

I've never been good with Haiku's i always need to express myself with more words.

SO who am I critisize ? I obviously can't. But I can try. :)

Poker4peace said...

Good stuff!

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WIP said...

that is the longest comment ever !