The Justin Haiku:
Sometimes I feel really
Bottled up inside;
Sometimes I am a bottle.
COI, Out.
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- Justin
- He is making up for years of trying too hard.
13 comments:
WIP:
I just wanted to say that I appreciate your idea about what Hiaku is. However, I am very confident that I have created a totally new poetic innovation and am rather proud of my 7-5-7 pattern.
JDK
P.S. Everone else: Wip hasn't posted. But I'm pscyhic.
I would have thought a psychic would be a better speller. Thank you for dispelling that myth (not to mention all those words).
If you haven't yet, check out Dylan Thomas's A Portait of the Artist as a Young Dog. I think you'll enjoy it.
very deep! i love it ! great job
the form is good i decided to not check the syllables lol and yes wow you are Psychic!
i haven't posted on my blog for a while cause a new one has been born that i am a member of i've kinda been working on that one, though i haven't gotten very far...
Les:
If someone memorized the dictionary, my spelling would be flawless.
J.
Part-Time Buddha:
Thanks. I'll check it out.
Justin
bossmack: Thanks! J.
wip: Don't overdo it on the blogging. I used to be awesome when I had just one. Now I have 38 and they all suck.
but good luck.
JDK
P.S. My nickname being where?
... curious to know what happens to an artist in a bottle or an artist who is a bottle when the cork gets popped ...
peace & harmony,
elaine
'freedom must be exercised to stay in shape!'
I'm working on it , i haven't forgotten :-)
this will only make 2 blogs. I won't have 100 million trillion like you *points finger*
your still an awsome blogger
http://lifeuncensoredamerica.blogspot.com/
it's still being worked on, no brilliant blogging yet
This post could be read as an invitation (I know, I know, I'm stretching here).
So are you inviting us all out for a drink?
Did you really say "you complete me" to someone in this lifetime?
Wouldn't have thought it of someone as ironic as you. Or maybe, heck, I just answered my own question.
what worries me is
not that you are the bottle
but that it's empty
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